in the morning, we went to tagaytay.. jane's house..its been a while since we saw her.. and aj too.. aj is her son.. he is already two years old.. i miss them honestly :p we talked about many things.. how we are right now, hows the other jerjer(name of our tropa..). then we go straight at sm dasma for lunch. as usual, i siggested pizza hut.. ( i eat on pizza hut and pancake most of the time, they are my favorites:p).. we have pizza, pasta, salad, fries, rice.. and a botomless ice tea! we where so full! we walked as if we where pregnant, we are carrying a heavy thing in our stomach. hehe.
then later in the afternoon, i go straight in quezon city.. there i will meet aira, and we will go to white plains village. i ride bus, then mrt. i stopped at quezon ave station.. i go down, and stay at the terminal. it was raining ! im so irritated, aira's late! i keep on shouting at her in the cellphone. and i get scared, because all the taxi drivers there was talking to me.. i was surrounded by them, i can't run because there is no way.. i snob them. at last, aira came!
i spank him for being late(as if im her mommy.hehe) we ride a taxi, then the taxi dropped us in "my place condominium" . he said, thats it.. i was so angry that time! the taxi driver was so "bwiset"! i want to kick him out of his taxi. he is so iresponsible. anyway, we just ride a taxi going to mrt.
i was so amazed of the mrt there. its the katipunan station i think. it was so clean, its my first time there. we took pictures, but the guard told us to delete it for some security reasons. hehe. we where laughing all the time.. hehehehehehe..
but we took pictures while the train is running. anyway..
my day is fine.. i have ups and downs..
i learned new thing..
" sometimes in life, we need to be at the lowest, to reach the top.. no one in the top didnt reach the lowest.. "
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" sometimes in life, we need to be at the lowest, to reach the top.. no one in the top didnt reach the lowest.. "
~I was touch by this praise, just want to share my experience, when I was in 4th yr. HS, in our batch, I reach the top too, but before I reach that place, there are many ups and downs in my life, many challenges and problems came, but then I've outdone them. Anyway, just want to tell you guys also that whenever you're at the top of your time of life, don't ever forget to look back to where you came from.
hi joana, thanks for sharing that with us. however, i would like to offer a few suggestions for revision:
1st paragraph:
"then we go [went] straight at sm dasma for lunch."
"i eat on [at] pizza hut and pancake most of the time, they are my favorites:p..
we have [had] pizza, pasta, salad, fries, rice.. and (a) botomless ice tea! "
3rd paragraph, since you are merely retelling a past incident, use the past tense consistently:
"then later in the afternoon, i go [went] straight in [to] quezon city.."
**actually, please change almost all of your verbs in this paragraph and in the last paragraph and use the past tense. please be mindful of the consistency of your tenses next time. thanks.
*legend:
[] - change to
() - delete
thanks miss:p
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